Shaun's Final Fanfic

Shaun's fan Fiction "Friends"

The events will take place in an alternate universe where "JOEY" is the main protagonist of the scenes. he will be  on an epic quest to solve mystery and find answers. The scene will also feature made up characters as "JOEY" goes through the different scenes i hope this will add more detail and feeling not only to the plot and setting  but also to "JOEY" as he moves into different scenes and situations.

            As the sun shines brightly and a fresh breeze in the air carefree Joey walks past the old Oak tree in the park rustle of the bushes birds singing bees buzzing and the odd chatter as the little tree animals scuffle into their homes at the sight of him. A short walk, A shortcut it you may call it few steps here a turn there through the bushes and you are back to the busy streets of the Big apple, into the city streets the environment greatly changes the air seems thicker constant  noise of people going about their daily life the sounds of birds or bees buzzing cant be heard any more instead its replaced with the sound of construction workers shouting at the top of their lungs so that the other guy can understand not to dig there.  A and trips over a cardboard box ''OH!!" he gets up and keeps walking stops in front of a store looks through the window but only his reflection appears, the sign hanging at the top of the door catches Joey's eye he looks at the sign "Modern day stuff", He opens the door a gust of cold air rashes at joey followed by a bell, a sharp noise as if a thousand needles falling set to trigger at the top of the door when someone walks in. joey swiftly moves in not to let the outside air mix with this new unknown environment he has been introduced to, He closes the door a bit but not fully and quickly adjusts his eyes to his new surroundings.  .

            "Hello"the room echos with his voice but still doesn't brake the cold dead silence buts adds more tension, as joey aimlessly looks around a cold boiling sweat runs down Joey's forehead his hair standing up and his neck prickles "hmmm"far across the room Joey notices a pile of books on the floor lying in a disfigured manner he decides to walk over to the pile of old books but only to bump his knee on the side of a shelf   "oh come on!!!" as joey lies on the floor embracing the sharp blow, blood rushes to his face, his breathing gets heavier as the sudden deprivation of common air mixes with this new sent that lingers near the pile of books sucking his strength as if a crippling blow that strikes not only the body but the mind. Joey musters up strength and gets up, at the point of his peak joey rises to the sight a dog statue with its pure white marble surface seeming to engulf every thing around it in light, without thinking joey walks towards the statue "can i help you!!!".

            Joey turns around to see an old man standing by the door he just walked  through "who are you!?" man stares and looks at joey "i am Santa Claus" Joey's face lights up "oh my god really!!?" " of course not you fool!!! what are you doing in my store!!?" "you lied" man walks over to the statue and pushes joey out of the way "course I'm not Santa he doesn't exist" "he doesn't exist!!!".

            "enough of you know what are you doing in this store" " i was looking for stuff like the sign said " man walks over to door and closes it. Turns and stares joey in the eye then looks at the statue "i see you like my dog??" joey turns looks at the dog statue then looks at the old man "you mean this well yeah i guess it cool" "hmmm would you like to have it??" joey looks at man confused then looks at the dog.

            "I'll let you have it if you can do something for me in return" man swiftly walks over to dog and places his palm on head. Joey then looks at the man who has his back at Joey "what do you want me to do" with a shuddered voice of hesitation and dismay.

            "hahaha good answer"the old man slowly walks over to the desk and gets a piece of paper  "i need you to help me find something you see, i have lost where i put it and can't find it" joey looks at the man "what is it that im looking for???" "what the package is isn't important whats important is that it returns back safe to me" . "and if i can return this item back to you you will have the statue??" man looks at joey and smiles "yes yes the dog will be all yours".

            " OK where do i look??" man hands joey the paper "here start looking at this address" joey takes the paper and looks at it "and if it's not here??" "well i guess you can forget about the dog then" man loughs and turns to desk. joey looks at dog and turns to door "oh and if you don't find my package don't bother coming back hahaha" joey opens door and leaves looks at the store sign again and looks at the piece of paper "i wounder where this is??".

            Walking down the street Joey thinking back to what the man said " don't bother coming back!!!" Joey keeps on walking "wow i wounder if he really meant that??" stops in front of man sitting on a bench walks up to man "excuse me do you know where this is??" man looks at joey and points to a building down the road joey turns to look at the building takes steps forward and turns to thank the man"thanks Mr.......!?" joey stairs at empty bench woman walking pasts stops " i see you met my husband he doesn't talk much likes his mystery novels and eating grapes" joey looks and smiles at old lady "oh really he seems like a pretty nice guy" "why yes he is" cough cough "he's really nice to children and loves animals.....but people seem to not notice him sometimes i guess it's the fact that we are old"cough cough cough joey looks at woman "oh I'm alright just these old bones catching up with me"   joey stairs at lady"you should go lie down"old lady looks and smiles at joey then looks towards the end of the road "i guess i should......now that i remember it's today 8 years ago my husband lied down too"  woman turns around and walks past the bench.

            Joey turns and looks at the woman walking away realizing what she had just said his heart sunk and the thought of the old ghost wondering kept itching at him for binding him to go any further but he knew he had nothing to worry about, but joey kept on wondering how his journey would turn out will he ever find the place he's looking for will he ever find the mysterious package will he be able to return to his Friends the same joey.

            To Be Continued

Other Fan-fiction Research

Rachel's Wedding
Summary: (humor)Since Rachel never had a wedding
 Explanation: Here the story is more of a described scene of when Rachel is walking down the aisle looking beautiful in her wedding gown. the scene also features other characters such as Rachel's mother who keeps telling Rachel's sisters to keep quite cause they are crying too loud but are not described anymore other than that. I am also guessing the scene is in a church it doesn't really say, another big factor is that in this whole scene all important members are gathered and described part from the groom i think here the writer chooses to leave this part up to the readers to decided. through out the whole scene is described and narrated by the writer in depth even the feelings Rachel has as she walks towards the unknown groom.

 SSA Chandler Robinson Bing
Summary:(humor/friendship)Chandler has a secret. A very big secret. He's in the F.B.I. His friends don't know and he doesn't want them to. What happens when Chandler has to leave New York because he can't stand the secret anymore. Let's see what new adventures await him in Quantico, Virginia. AU rated T to be safe.
Explanation: This Fanfic was a bit  hard to understand but after reading it through again the story seemed really simple Chandler as the main Character is a secret agent who works as an SSA agent that much is easy to understand but then there's also his background story of his parents and so on his friends have no idea of his other job and new characters "Josh and Sydney" who we are introduced to in the first few sentences but their relationship at this point is not clear so well just call them "Friends" the story seems to have a slow start but once you get into it its very interesting to read.

  How I Met Your Mother deleted-scenes
Summary: (Friendship/Family) Non angst this time. Cute sweet humor between the five friends
Explanation:This short story is mainly focusing on reconciliation of Ted and Lily after the prior events of the series, the writer in this short passage wrote in memory of the two friends who were split up but now saying sorry to each and becoming friends again.there's not much to say about this short passage and a lot of the writers concentration seems to go to his character growth and more like he is letting the story flow he is neither the narrator nor a role player in the scene but the format seems like a script and the actual characters are doing the talking which is a unique way to write.

Red-Ribbons
Summary:(Romance)Tristan stumbles upon a curious maiden, and keeps a token. Oneshot.
Explanation: Here there's little dialect between the characters and the writer main focus is to send an emotion to the readers his choice of words are very simple to read and understand the setting is very appropriate for the plot and the character presentation  resembles that of the original. I would have wanted to see more interaction to the characters in the scene and possibly more detail in the setting the writer described everything with a simple detail which in turn set the mood during this scene.

A toy story Christmas
Summary: It's Christmas Eve and Woody is missing Bo. But when a surprise comes, how will he react?
Explanation: This Fanfic has many POV's (point of view). We first have Woody's and Buzz's conversation in script form, then the scene turns to a more general script form were all the toys have gathered and talking about the mysterious Christmas present. The we have Woody's POV but also we get to see his feelings on the missing Bo the writer gives us a message which tells the readers that Woody is not feeling well at the loss of his friend. The last part is a Normal POV as the writer takes on the role of Bo in order to explain the situation this is not long however the writer decides to put in a short flashback scene but not much is explained the scene then changes to a script style POV interaction between Woody and Bo as they hold and embrace each other wishing them selves a merry Christmas.  

Chantel's Fan Fiction Draft 1

The eighty-second king of Stormhold, Tristran Thorn, nervously paced the hallway outside his bed chamber. Like every expectant father in the world, this one was a little in over his head. 

Candlelight flickered in their holders casting long shadows on the walls.  

From inside the chamber came the spirited cries of Lady Yvaine, and the odd cuss. She wasn't adverse to using bad words as her husband well knew.

He dragged a shaky hand through his dense brown hair that fell over his face in a dishevelled mess. 

 “How much longer?” He cast agonized nut-brown eyes to his father. Dunstan put a reassuring hand on Tristran’s shoulder.

 “A little while more, son. Your wife is strong, you don’t have to worry.”

 But he did worry. He knew of women who had died in childbirth and couldn't bear to think what he would do if his wife was one of them. But Yvaine wasn't a normal woman. She was a fallen star he had found and fallen in love with. She was spirited and tough and the most beautiful woman in the world. 

 "I feel like I should be in there, with her."

Dunstan laughed. "Trust me when I say you'd rather not be in there. If you want to live another day that is."

 Tristran let go a long suffering sigh. Then he turned at the sound of a door opening. Princess Una was one of the faerie people and had the ears of a cat, deep violet eyes and a tumble of black curly hair. She stepped out of the chamber, eyes damp and face flushed. She reached out her hands for Tristran’s.

 “She wants you, Tristran.”

 He swallowed nervously and entered the bed chamber.

 His wife, his personal star, Yvaine, sat up against the headboard of the grand bed, cradling a little bundle in her arms. Her magnificent white blonde hair was damp with sweat and her pale face was tinged with rose. But despite this, no one could miss the ethereal glowing emanating from her and the child. She’d once told him, ‘the best thing a star does, is Shine.’

 With careful steps Tristran went to her side. She instantly took his hand in hers. She was so warm, which was a wonder since her skin was always so cold.

 “We’re both fine. I'm in no danger.”

  Tristran let out a shaky breath and looked at the baby nestled in her arms.

 “We have a daughter, Tristran,” Yvaine told him with a brilliant smile. Tristran watched his daughter suckling happily at her mother’s breast. Her tiny fist opening and closing to some internal rhythm. Without words, Yvaine gently passed the baby into Tristran’s arms. 

He felt like a clumsy fool, but Tristran embraced his new born daughter with the care of a man holding a fragile glass globe.

The little girl yawned hugely and her lashes fluttered open. Startling summer blue eyes stared at him with open curiosity. Her rosy lips puckered into a plump O. Tristran smiled and traced the shape of her light downy eyebrows. Her little hand instantly reached for his, her little fingers curling over his thumb. He felt his world tilt and steady right then and there and knew what he had to do.

 “We’ll name her Nola.”

 “Nola.” Yvaine nodded and her eyes went misty. She watched her husband carry their daughter to the window. With Nola cradled against his chest, Tristran looked at the moon, and thanked her for his wonderful gift in both Yvaine and Nola.

 “I vow, here and now that I, Tristran Thorn, the eighty-second king of Stormhold, will protect and love this child until the day that I die. I give you, Princess Nola Thorn. Keep her safe and let her light shine bright.”

As if on cue, Nola began to shine. Nola laughed and Tristran felt light of heart for the first time in days.

...

Across the land the people of Stormhold heard the King’s promise. One person in particular found the news delightful. They called her the Hidden Witch. No one knows of her, except in legend, because no one has ever seen her. Her beauty was like no other. Raven black hair with skin so pale you’d think she was a ghost. 

Unlike her unfortunate cousins, the Hidden Witch’s power doesn't come from fallen stars, but from young children with hearts so innocent they hold the most power of all. What no one knows about the Hidden Witch is that she herself is still a child. She will never grow old, but she will eventually waste away which is worse than growing old. She sat in her high backed chair, looking into the mirror that could see all. She saw the child, her light so bright it hurt to look at her. 

Ten years had passed since her birth and she happily played with the carefree innocence of a child in the fields.

 The Witch’s hands went damn with anticipation.

 “I want her,” she said in a child-like voice. Her green eyes glinted with desire.

 “You know the price for leaving the house,” the ominous voice said from the mirror.

 “Growing up,” the Witch said with malice. It came out with so much hatred the room shuddered. “But I can live a very long while with that one’s heart. The Princess of Stormhold.” Even as she said it her voice became animated, and she began to plan.

...

Nola played in the high grass, laughing as she tried to catch the butterflies. She loved being outside. She crept up to the butterfly, slowly reaching out to catch it. But the moment she moved the butterfly flew away.

In its place was a girl with black hair and green eyes. She was very white.

 “Hello. I’m Nola.”

“I’m Selena. Do you want to play?”

“Sure. I’m catching butterflies.” Nola smiled at Selena. Her father told her not to talk to strangers, but this one was a girl her age. She couldn’t hurt her, at least she thought that.

“I saw a few of them fly over there.” Selena pointed to the black forest. It was a forbidden place.

 “I’m not allowed to go there,” Nola said sadly.

“No one will know. Trust me.” Selena put out her hand. Nola hesitated before taking it. “We’ll be back before you know it.”

“Okay. Do you promise?”

 “With all my heart.” Selena’s eyes suddenly went dark and her smile widened. Nola didn’t know what to think of it so she pushed it out of her mind and followed Selena into the forest. She didn’t like the forest but Selena had promised it wouldn’t take long.

 “Come, they are over here.”

The Hidden Witch led the Princess deeper into the forest and resisted doing a happy dance. Tonight she was going to feast…

The End

Jad's Final Fan Fiction

My final piece.

The Ending story of The Lord of The Rings: Return of The King

"Sons of Gondor, of Rohan. My brothers. I see in your eyes the same fear that would take the heart of me! A day may come, when the courage of men fails, when we forsake our friends and break all bonds of Fellowship, but it is not this day! An hour of wolves and shattered shields when the age of men comes crashing down! But it is not this day! This day we fight! By all that you hold dear on this good earth, I bid you, stand, men of the West!" - Aragorn son of Arathorn

The speech that gave me goosebumps all over my body before the spine-chilling fight at the 'Black Gate'.

My fan fiction is based on Lord of The Rings: The Return of The King. This movie is the last part of the trilogy; the final battle of middle earth to save the eradication of the human race. Sam and Frodo continuing their epic journey to the dreadful Mount Doom led by the two-faced Gollum; with one mission in mind, to destroy 'The Ring'... Or so they thought. 

The journey was intense and burdensome, betrayal of friendship and doubts surrounded all because of 'the precious'. The menacing power of the ring has blinded Frodo's mind darkened his perception not knowing what's wrong or right. Making Frodo look down on Sam and saying sternly but quietly 'Go home Sam' at the stairs of Cirith Ungol.

As Frodo continues his journey without Sam and being led by Gollum inside the cave of Shelob's Lair as Frodo lost tracked of Gollum, he finds himself  bewildered as Gollum had disappeared and tricked him. As Frodo tries to find a way out he encounters with 'Shelob the Giant Spider' he got himself trapped and stung by Shelob.   

In my opinion this part of the movie was an unforgettable scene that had the biggest reaction from the movie goers. 

That is when our heroic savior Sam wise Gamgee comes running holding Frodo's sting sword and the Phial of Galadriel's light. 
"Let him go you filth" as Sam threatens Shelob; Sam then battles the spider he first cleaved off the claw from one of Shelob's legs and pierce out one of the eye, leaving Shelob to run back to its lair.

As Sam thinking Frodo is dead, he unwillingly took the Ring from his bestfriend and left his body. Until he hears two Orcs conversating that Shelob injects a small dosive of poison from her victims to keep the meat fresh. Sam bravely tries to save Frodo having that 'you aren't hurting Mr. Frodo' look as he gives a terrifying gaze at the Orcs.

"That's for Frodo" as Sam chops an Orc, "That's for the Shire" as Sam continuously swings his sword at another Orc. Sam successfully rescues Frodo from the Orcs castle and continues their path on destroying the Ring.

In my opinion Sam Gamgee is more of a hero for me than Frodo as he never gave up on his friend no matter how bad the situation was. He was what you call a true hero and a friend.

"We did it Mr. Frodo, we made it to Mordor". Sam and Frodo advances to the deep end of Mordor to end their mission and hopefully destroy the Ring.

Meanwhile Aragorn leading the courageous Army of the West heads towards the Black Gate to try divert Sauron attention from Frodo and Sam who are trying to destroy the One Ring into Mordor.
Before the fight initiated, Sauron sent one of his unearthly servant the "Black Numenorean" to speak for Sauron. The Mouth of Sauron throws an Elven Cloak which belonged to Frodo and Sam to deceive Gandalf that he has held captive of the Hobbits. The Numenorean threatened to torture the hobbits if the Men of The West do not comply to Sauron and surrender.

However Aragorn would not be swayed as he menacingly slices the Numenorean's head off saying "I do not believe it, I do not". Thus, the epic battle began.

Meanwhile during the course of the battle, Frodo and Sam finally reached inside the belly of the beast of Mordor.

"Destroy it!" shouted Sam with a disconsolate look on his face.

But the power of the ring would not let Frodo destroy it. As Frodo turns vigorously to Sam "The Ring is mine" as he reluctantly puts on the ring and disappears.

Out of nowhere Gollum arrives in the scene and struggled fighting with the invisible Frodo. Finally, after moments of endeavor Gollum bites off Frodo's finger and able to gain the ring. As Gollum exclaimed in triumph, Frodo fiercely battles him for the ring but Gollum stepped over the edge and fell into the lava as he takes the ring down with him. Thus, the ring was finally destroyed and Sauron the great was defeated!

This scene was on the most nail-biting performance between Frodo and Sam, as it just captures one of the greatest moments of the movie and gives me shivers down my spine. 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/667523/1/Lord-of-the-Rings-Fellowship-of-the-Ring

Summary: Set in the shire, a made up fan fiction, two riders in search for Bilbo Baggins wanting to discuss a secret proposition.
Critical Evaluation: This fan fiction is very interesting as its a combination of a made up story combine with the first episode of the Lord of The Rings: Return of The King. It show that two new characters name Addreilinis and Denethor wanted to talk to Bilbo about the Golden Ring he possessed. In the end of his story he continues with Bilbo putting on the ring and disappear in front of his guests. The author has made a mix of different types of emotion in this story to capture the readers attention as he also tells us that evil looking characters are not what they seem to be. Moral of the story is "Never judge a book by its cover". 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1429014/1/Lord-of-the-Rings
Summary: Its a combination of Lord of The Rings and Harry Potter as Harry annihilates Frodo Baggins and his accomplices and stole The Ring. He hides from the evil Sauron and his deadly minions. 
Critical Evaluation: This is actually a pretty good fanfic although it is short, the story definitely captivates you and wants you to continue reading. It's about Harry Potter eradicate Frodo Baggins and his accomplice to steal the mighty Ring, and by doing so the great and powerful Sauron is plotting and assassination on the Hogwarts School. It gets very intense as Sauron comes as himself and try to defeat the powerful wizards of Hogwarts.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9144184/1/Holding-On-To-Nothing
Summary: A friends tv show fan fiction telling the readers about Monica and Chandler Bing getting married and Phoebe finding out that Monica is pregnant. Or is she? 
Critical Evaluation: This fan fiction actually made me laugh especially when Chandler's witty sarcasm jokes has been mentioned by the author. Phoebe finds a pregnancy test thrown in the trash in Monica's trash can despite that it did not belong to her. She then tells everybody that Monica is pregnant. Remembering the video of the episode Monica and Chandler has this bewildered look on their face that makes you laugh out loud, so imagining it in the fan fiction just made me burst out laughing. The catch of this fan fic is the author added a different ending of the story where there was a crash crash after wedding but it does not tell us who was in the crash. I hope to see the continuation of this story as its very entertaining and just captivates you on reading more.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1135412/1/The-Time-Legolas-Went-Mad
Summary: A story of the bedevilled elf Legolas going berserk and annihilating everyone he encounters. 
Critical Evaluation: Incredibly made up story of Legolas who has gone insane executing different characters from the book who weren't shown in the movies. This writer is a big fan of The Lord of The Rings as he mentions characters that was before Frodo Baggins setting out on a mission to destroy The Ring. The story is also really witty and funny which makes the reader giggle for a few seconds and it also makes you think what if Legolas joined forces with Sauron and killing his own comrades. 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8218143/1/Fresh-Prince-Book-I-Chapter-1
Summary: A clever and entertaining fan fiction of The Fresh Prince of Bel Air's main character Will Smith. He somehow lost his memories and thinks his in someone else's story and is a bit oblivious around him. 
Critical Evaluation: A strong anecdote written with sophisticated words that gets you fascinated on how interesting this fan fiction has been structured. This story is about Will starting fresh and forget the troubles he had caused back home with his mother and start a new with his Uncle and the family. Its really interesting read as he makes the reader think about life and that sometimes the world does not revolve around you. I would have wanted to see more of the story and find out if he had made amends with his new family. 

Tony's Final Fan Fiction

This fan fiction i am writing is related to the one of Ubisoft's video game: FarCry.

This game is about jungle adventures, tropical islands, gun fights, survival, and pirates.

Disclaimer: I do not own anything, the characters are owned my Ubisoft itself.

The true definition of INSANITY

"Wow, this is something else." said Jerry, who is a friend of my back in high school

"This is actually wayyy better than Tokyo or anywhere else." the voice of Nichole, my ex-girlfriend

"Okay, okay, we better find a place to stay first"

I started to wonder where in the blue we can stay for our vacation on this vacation

So we arrived at this island call "Rook Islands"

Oh i forgot to introduce myself, my name is Connor Nayati, my father was a native American warrior when he was young, but my grandfather wanted him to be something else so he took my father to Boston for a better life.
And then he met my mother, Alice, according to my father she was the most beautiful woman my father's ever seen, i bet that is true, because my mother it is indeed beautiful.

On the map, this island is nowhere to be found, maybe captain Cook did not go this far in the pacific because of...i don't know, shortage of sailors maybe?

Anyway, this island is located in the middle of the pacific ocean....probably the size of Rio, according to my 50 dollar GPS i bought from that Korean mini-supermarket looking store in LA.

In my opinion, this island is gorgeous, white beaches, palm trees, coconuts, sexy girls with bikinis......maybe not.

The sea water was like, the bluest, clearest sea water I've ever seen in my entire life so far.

So we found a place to stay for the night on this tropical paradise. It was this local residence farm, the family name's Kahu, they were from New Zealand, and then because of the struggle they moved out of New Zealand to this tropical paradise. They were all very friendly and kind, just like our own parents.

The father's name was Barry, he was in the New Zealand Army when he was about my age, had a sleeve tattoo on his right arm of some of the New Zealand Maori tribal designs, i always wanted a sleeve tattoo like his.
The family had two boys, Jason and James Kahu, they both was born on this island on the same day, which makes them twins. The mother, Samantha, she's the cousin of the local tribe leader. Samantha was just like my mother, beautiful, kind and brave.

It was this story that Barry told us on the first night we spend on this island that scared me a little, he told us this island was once controlled by pirates.

The pirate leader, by the name of Vaas, he was one of the tribe members , but back in the days the tribe was poor, powerless and broken, Vaas and Citra both lead the tribe and then one day Vaas had enough of the life that he was having in the tribe and then became a pirate because of the money they can make, and all the crazy stuff that he can do, and then finally Vaas has became crazy.

The pirates capture tourists, getting ransom money from their parents or love ones and then sell them into slavery. Barry saw Vaas executed some of the people he captured by blowing their head off with a powerful handgun and hang their bodies on trees in the jungle, the smell of blood, dead bodies was all over the jungle, and was terrifying. The brutality of the pirates are just unthinkable.

There was this one time when Barry was captured by Vass himself, Barry was prepared to die when Vaas and his pirates got him and his men, Barry saw it with his own eyes, that Vaas executes Barrys men one by one, and with different mathods of killing them, it was brutal. And then they saved Barry to the last one for Vaas, Barry was ready to sacrafice himself, but the sick-minded Vaas had something else in his head, Vass tie him on a chair and knocked Barry out cold.

After a few minuts, Barry woke up and find himself inside and dark room with his mouth taped, just him sitting there and a table.......with a pistol laying on the table. Barry felt frightented, his legs and arms was shaking so hard to the point that he almost passed out.

"BOOM!" the door was kicked opend, Barry looked up, it was Vaas, he closed the door slowly with a scary smile on his face, and then he sat on the table.

"How's my pretty little island worrior? huh? have you been a good boy? huh?"

Barry didn't move a muscle, just kept his head down, he doesn't want to look into Vaas' scrary eyes.

"Why don't you answer me sweet heart? huh amigo" said Vaas with a heavy coasta rican spanish accent.

Barry again didn't move a muscle, and Vaas just sat there, staring at his frightened sweating face, Vaas nodded, "OK then, you wanna play quiet huh? you wanna play quiet huh?"

He pulled out a wahini doll from his pocket and showed it to Barry. "AROHA!!! hahahaha look! it's my beautiful little wahini, hahahahaha isn't she beautiful? huh?." the little wahini isn't a regular wahini doll, its head was replaced by a head made by Vaas, it looks just like Vaas.

"Do you know that she is the most beautiful woman on this island? hahahaha aren't you guapa?" the craziness of Vaas is just keep getting worse and worse.

Vaas pointed the wahini doll at Barry and pretended a girly voice:"My name is Vaas Wahini, i'm so beautiful....."

Barry wasn't looking, Vaas noticed and then put the wahini doll in front of Barry's face and said:"Ohh you don't think you's beautiful? huh? YOU DON'T THINK SHE IS BEAUTIFUL!!!??? well, DAMN YOU!!!!" The voice of Vaas exploded in the room, Barry jumped and was so scared that he couldn't move.

"Let me tell you something amigo, let me tell you.....the definition of insanity, that is.....doing the same friggin thing.....over....and over.....and over again?"

Other fan fictions researched:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9086446/1/Tempting-Opportunity
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8924406/1/days-like-any-other
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9096921/1/a-new-addition
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9166460/1/Night-terrors
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9126369/1/FarCry3-Changing-paths

David's Final Fan Fiction

Tony's Fan Fiction draft/plan

This fan fiction i am writing is related to the one of Ubisoft's video game: FarCry.

This game is about jungle adventures,  tropical islands, gun fights, survival, and pirates.

Disclaimer: I do not own anything,  the characters are owned my Ubisoft itself.

The true definition of INSANITY

"Wow, this is something else." said Jerry, who is a friend of my back in high school

"This is actually wayyy better than Tokyo or anywhere else." the voice of Nichole, my ex-girlfriend

"Okay, okay, we better find a place to stay first" 

I started to wonder where in the blue we can stay for our vacation on this vacation

So we arrived at this island call "Rook Islands"

Oh i forgot to introduce myself, my name is Connor Nayati, my father was a native American warrior when he was young, but my grandfather wanted him to be something else so he took my father to Boston for a better life.
And then he met my mother, Alice, according to my father she was the most beautiful woman my father's ever seen, i bet that is true, because my mother it is indeed beautiful.

On the map, this island is nowhere to be found, maybe captain Cook did not go this far in the pacific because of...i don't know, shortage of sailors maybe?

Anyway, this island is located in the middle of the pacific ocean....probably the size of Rio, according to my 50 dollar GPS i bought from that Korean mini-supermarket looking store in LA.

In my opinion, this island is gorgeous, white beaches, palm trees, coconuts, sexy girls with bikinis......maybe not.

The sea water was like, the bluest, clearest sea water I've ever seen in my entire life so far.

So we found a place to stay for the night on this tropical paradise. It was this local residence farm, the family name's Kahu, they were from New Zealand, and then because of the struggle they moved out of New Zealand to this tropical paradise. They were all very friendly and kind, just like our own parents.

The father's name was Barry, he was in the New Zealand Army when he was about my age, had a sleeve tattoo on his right arm of some of the New Zealand Maori tribal designs, i always wanted a sleeve tattoo like his.
The family had two boys, Jason and James Kahu, they both was born on this island on the same day, which makes them twins. The mother, Samantha, she's the cousin of the local tribe leader. Samantha was just like my mother, beautiful, kind and brave.

It was this story that Barry told us on the first night we spend on this island that scared me a little, he told us this island was once controlled by pirates.

The pirate leader, by the name of Vaas, he was one of the tribe members , but back in the days the tribe was poor, powerless and broken, Vaas and Citra both lead the tribe and then one day Vaas had enough of the life that he was having in the tribe and then became a pirate because of the money they can make, and all the crazy stuff that he can do, and then finally Vaas has became crazy.

The pirates capture tourists, getting ransom money from their parents or love ones and then sell them into slavery. Barry saw Vaas executed some of the people he captured by blowing their head off with a powerful handgun and hang their bodies on trees in the jungle, the smell of blood, dead bodies was all over the jungle, and was terrifying. The brutality of the pirates are just unthinkable.

There was this one time when Barry was captured by Vass himself, Barry was prepared to die when Vaas and his pirates got him and his men, Barry saw it with his own eyes, that Vaas executes Barrys men one by one, and with different mathods of killing them, it was brutal. And then they saved Barry to the last one for Vaas, Barry was ready to sacrafice himself, but the sick-minded Vaas had something else in his head, Vass  tie him on a chair and knocked Barry out cold.

After a few minuts, Barry woke up and find himself inside and dark room with his mouth taped, just him sitting there and a table.......with a pistol laying on the table. Barry felt frightented, his legs and arms was shaking so hard to the point that he almost passed out.

"BOOM!" the door was kicked opend, Barry looked up, it was Vaas, he closed the door slowly with a scary smile on his face, and then he sat on the table.

"How's my pretty little island worrior? huh? have you been a good boy? huh?"

Barry didn't move a muscle, just kept his head down, he doesn't want to look into Vaas' scrary eyes.

"Why don't you answer me sweet heart? huh amigo" said Vaas with a heavy coasta rican spanish accent.

Barry again didn't move a muscle, and Vaas just sat there, staring at his frightened sweating face, Vaas nodded, "OK then, you wanna play quiet huh? you wanna play quiet huh?"

He pulled out a wahini doll from his pocket and showed it to Barry. "AROHA!!! hahahaha look! it's my beautiful little wahini, hahahahaha isn't she beautiful? huh?." the little wahini isn't a regular wahini doll, its head was replaced by a head made by Vaas, it looks just like Vaas.

"Do you know that she is the most beautiful woman on this island? hahahaha aren't you guapa?" the craziness of Vaas is just keep getting worse and worse.

Vaas pointed the wahini doll at Barry and pretended a girly voice:"My name is Vaas Wahini, i'm so beautiful....."

Barry wasn't looking, Vaas noticed and then put the wahini doll in front of Barry's face and said:"Ohh you don't think you's beautiful? huh? YOU DON'T THINK SHE IS BEAUTIFUL!!!??? well, DAMN YOU!!!!" The voice of Vaas exploded in the room, Barry jumped and was so scared that he couldn't move.

"Let me tell you something amigo, let me tell you.....the definition of insanity, that is.....doing the same friggin thing.....over....and over.....and over again?"

Leigh's Final Fan Fiction

“…And these children

that you spit on

as they try to change their worlds

are immune to your consultations.

They’re quite aware

of what they’re going through."

                       

                                DAVID BOWIE

KNOW ME OR JUDGE ME?

Saturday, March 24th, 2012. Howick High School. Howick, Auckland, 2016

3.00pm

"Dear Mrs Adams

We accept the fact that we had to sacrifice a whole Saturday in detention for whatever it was that we did wrong. What we did was wrong. But we think you're crazy to make us write an entire essay telling you who we think we are. What do you care? You see us as you want to see us...in the simplest of terms and the most convenient definitions. You see us as the Asian, the Skux, the Emo, the Slut and the Gangster. Correct? That's the way we saw each other at seven o'clock this morning. We judged."

7.00am

A plump middle aged lady stands in front of the classroom with her hands on her hips, glaring at each student as they walk to their seats and sit down.

“Georgia Mayor?” she calls out, voluptuous, blonde headed girl looks at her and smiles half-heartedly and then continues texting.

“Sang Yung?” A lanky Asian boy with glasses looks up from the front row, raises his hand and quickly pulls it down.

“Samuel Miako?” A tall muscular boy raises his hand. “Yo”, he replies.

“Amber Rutherford?”  A pale girl with long dark hair timidly raises her hand from the back corner of the classroom, not looking up at all.

“And why am I not surprised…Roland Wright”, the teacher says, smirking.

Roland stands up and bows, yelling “the name’s Rock”.

He sits down laughing.

Ignoring him she exclaims “It is 7.06am you have eight hours to write me an essay telling me who you punks think you are.”

Sang looks up listening intently, the rest of them doing their own thing.

“There’s no talking allowed and no moving. In fact, don't even think about leaving this classroom.” And she walks out, slamming the door behind her.

8.30am

Everyone starts to get comfortable.

Samuel bounces his ball against the table, leaning back on his chair.

Georgia texts intensively, seeming utterly grossed at the fact that she’s stuck in a room with these people.

Sang lies quietly with his head on the desk, beginning to doze off.

Amber sits with her legs folded on her chair drawing an extraordinarily detailed picture of a dying rose.

Rock pulls out a box of cigarettes and a lighter and starts smoking, while listening to loud Rap music through his big red headphones. 

10.53am

Mrs Adams walks back into the classroom to find them all fast asleep. “GET UP if you want to go to the toilet” she yells.

They all jump up quickly rushing out the door, jolting past each other.

Georgia and Amber walk into the toilet together. Georgia answers her ringing phone.

“Hey Ash, you will never believe who's in detention.”

Amber stands in the cubical listening quietly.

“Emo Amber” she says laughing. "She's probably in here for cutting other peoples wrists."

Amber storms out the toilet. “YOU SKANKY, HOEBAG! WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE GOSSIPING ABOUT PEOPLE, WHEN YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW THEM."  

Shocked at Amber’s reaction, Georgia roars “YOU WALK AROUND LIKE YOU ARE THE ONLY ONE IN THE WORLD WITH PROBLEMS.”

 “WELL AT LEAST I'M NOT A BITCH WHO PUTS OTHERS DOWN BECAUSE SHE HAS LOW SELF-ESTEEM," Amber responds.

Outraged, Georgia pushes Amber, “WELL AT LEAST I DON'T TRY AND KILL MYSELF BECAUSE OF IT”

They stare at one another in dead silence. Tears start dripping down Amber’s face.

“YOU SELF CENTERED WHORE” she yells. “WELL IF YOU WERE TAKEN ADVANTAGE OF BY YOUR OWN FATHER, YOU WOULD WANT TO BE DEAD TOO!”

Horrified, Georgia shuts her phone. “SHIT, I never knew. My boyfriend and his uncle do the same to me, and my parents are never around to even care, they just buy me things to make it look like they do.”

Amber looks startlingly at Georgia, whose cheeks also had black streams running down. Soundlessly they walk out the bathroom amazed at how alike their situations are.

Rock pushes past Sang.

“Faggot”, he exclaims laughing loudly.

Samuel strolling behind them chuckles and walks past Sang saying “don’t listen to that douche bag”.

Sang ignores him, mumbling under his breath. 

Rock pulls out a joint in the bathroom and starts so smoke. Sang stares at him.

"Oi want a joint",

"errr no thanks" Sang replies.

"I said try one faggot, don't be a pussy"

"Leave him alone stoner" Samuel intrudes.

"You try one then tough guy"

"No thanks" Samuel says cautiously

"Bet you've never tried weed before"

"Nah, I have!" Samuel declares.

12pm

The boys wander into the room looking completely dazed, Sang almost falling over. They all sit back in their seats trying to look as normal as possible.

“You have 30 minutes for Lunch” Mrs Adams exclaims walking past the classroom pompously.

Each one pulls out a lunchbox except for Rock and Sang.

“Where’s your lunch turd” Rock says scornfully.

Sang looks down at the table, “I don’t have any” he replies."

“Why not?” Rock smirks, “Dad's sushi shop close down?”

The others giggle.

“No” Sang answers, “His company did.”

"F this" Rock says and walks out the classroom.

Samuel follows him, wobbling out the door.

"Have my lunch bro" Samuel offers, "I had the meanest breakfast before I came."

Rock ignores him, holding onto his pride and continues shooting hoops. Samuel puts the lunch on the ground and walks back to the classroom.

Rock picks up the lunch and eats the bread. He walks back to classroom.

Walking past Sang, Rock puts the rest of the lunch on his table and walks back to his seat.


2.55pm
In silence they get ready to go home, stunned at how similar they're lifestyles are. 

"Will it change their attitudes towards each other? time can only tell, but it has definitely changed their view of each other."


3pm

"Dear Mrs Adams

We accept the fact that we had to sacrifice a whole Saturday in detention for whatever it was that we did wrong. What we did was wrong. But we think you're crazy to make us write an entire essay telling you who we think we are. What do you care? You see us as you want to see us. But what we found out is that we judged each other on what we thought we knew when really we knew nothing at all. We thought we were different, but we are exactly the same. So my question to you is… do you want to know who you've judged or do you want to know us?

Sincerely

the Asian, the Skux, the Emo, the Slut and the Gangster"