shaun's fan fiction planing session

Shaun's fan Fiction "Friends"

The events will take place in an alternate universe where "JOEY" is the main protagonist of the scenes. he will be  on an epic quest to solve mystery and find answers. The scene will also feature made up characters as "JOEY" goes through the different scenes i hope this will add more detail and feeling not only to the plot and setting  but also to the "JOEY" as he moves into different scenes and situations.

            Joey walks trips over a cardboard box ''OH!!" a penny, keeps walking stops in front of a store looks through the window but only his reflection appears, the sign hanging at the top of the door catches Joey's eye he looks at the sign "Modern day stuff", He opens the door a gust of cold air rashes at joey followed by a bell a sharp noise as if a thousand needles falling set to trigger at the top of the door when someone walks in. joey swiftly moves in not to let the outside air mix with this new unknown environment he has been introduced to, Joey closes the door a bit but not fully and quickly adjusts his eyes to his new surroundings.  .

            "Hello"the room echos with his voice but still doesn't brake the cold dead silence buts adds more tension as joey aimlessly looks around a cold boiling sweat runs down Joey's forehead his hair standing up and his neck prickles "hmmm"far across the room Joey notices a pile of books on the floor lying in a disfigured manner he decides to walk over to the pile of old books but only to bump his knee on the side of a shelf   "oh come on!!!" as joey lies on the floor embracing the sharp blow, blood rushes to his face, his breathing gets heavier as the sudden deprivation of common air mixes with this new sent that lingers near the pile of books sucking his strength as if a crippling blow that strikes not only the body but the mind. Joey musters up strength and gets up, at the point of his peak joey rises to the sight a dog statue with its pure white marble surface seeming to engulf every thing around it in light, without thinking joey walks towards the statue "can i help you!!!".

            Joey turns around to see an old man standing by the door he just walked  through "who are you!?" man stares and looks at joey "i am Santa Claus" Joey's face lights up "oh my god really!!?" " of course not you fool!!! what are you doing in my store!!?" "you lied" man walks over to the statue and pushes joey out of the way "course I'm not Santa he doesn't exist" "he doesn't exist!!!".

            "enough of you know what are you doing in this store" " i was looking for stuff like the sign said " man walks over to door and closes it. Turns and stares joey in the eye then looks at the statue "i see you like my dog??" joey turns looks at the dog statue then looks at the old man "you mean this well yeah i guess it cool" "hmmm would you like to have it??" joey looks at man confused then looks at the dog.

            "I'll let you have it if you can do something for me in return" man swiftly walks over to dog and places his palm on head. Joey then looks at the man who has his back at Joey "what do you want me to do" with a shuddered voice of hesitation and dismay.

            "hahaha good answer"the old man slowly walks over to the desk and gets a piece of paper  "i need you to help me find something you see, i have lost where i put it and can't find it" joey looks at the man "what is it that im looking for???" "what the package is isn't important whats important is that it returns back safe to me" . "and if i can return this item back to you you will have the statue??" man looks at joey and smiles "yes yes the dog will be all yours".

            " OK where do i look??" man hands joey the paper "here start looking at this address" joey takes the paper and looks at it "and if it's not here??" "well i guess you can forget about the dog then" man loughs and turns to desk. joey looks at dog and turns to door "oh and if you don't find my package don't bother coming back hahaha" joey opens door and leaves looks at the store sign again and looks at the piece of paper "i wounder where this is??".

            Walking down the street Joey thinking back to what the man said " don't bother coming back!!!" Joey keeps on walking "wow i wounder if he really meant that??" stops in front of man sitting on a bench walks up to man "excuse me do you know where this is??" man looks at joey and points to a building down the road joey turns to look at the building takes steps forward and turns to thank the man"thanks Mr.......!?" joey stairs at empty bench woman walking pasts stops " i see you met my husband he doesn't talk much likes his mystery novels and eating grapes" joey looks and smiles at old lady "oh really he seems like a pretty nice guy" "why yes he is" cough cough "he's really nice to children and loves animals.....but people seem to not notice him sometimes i guess it's the fact that we are old"cough cough cough joey looks at woman "oh I'm alright just these old bones catching up with me"   joey stairs at lady"you should go lie down"old lady looks and smiles at joey then looks towards the end of the road "i guess i should......now that i remember it's today 8 years ago my husband lied down too"  woman turns around and walks past the bench.

            Joey turns and looks at the woman walking away realizing what she had just said his heart sunk and the thought of the old ghost wondering kept itching at him for binding him to go any further but he knew he had nothing to worry about, but joey kept on wondering how his journey would turn out will he ever find the place he's looking for will he ever find the mysterious package will he be able to return to his Friends the same joey.

            To Be Continued

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